Togetherness!
words are the weapons of this world
the mightiest strongest most powerful
when they strike
screams don’t dare escape throats
they beat you down the road till the end
till the bend of that farthest corner
so you do not return in search of solace
you turn the corner
mend the bend
and walk further on lonely roads
filled with myriads of possibilities
yet when you peep inside you see none
you feel a void unfulfilled
since the day you added wings to your dreams
from the moment you chose to commit your own crimes
words strike you at the slightest of provocations
words hit you right at the left of your chest
words sit inside your brain
trained to drill deeper and deeper
destined to enclose all you stand for
make you search for anti-dotes
for diamond they say is cut by a diamond only
you look for your diamond
I look for mine
and together we shall shine those
striking against each other
sharpening our mutual arsenal
and taking this war of words
beyond this hatred
to the blessed world of togetherness!
..WOW Dear Pritts you have really been wonderful in putting the classical idea of togetherness into all together a new and a very contemporary mould.
… yes…diamond sharpens diamond.And if we can sense sharpening of our wits we know we already have a diamond by our side. And you are no less Dear.
…this poetry is where ‘words’ get unseeming companion in the thoughts and ideas of others. After all words are nothing but ideas put to words. It is ‘wading’ through this cohesiveness that we try and reach out for some real anti dote for this world already ‘ broken into narrow domestic walls’. The words really echo and keep resonating … there being no escape from that till they settle at the depth of our consciousness.
‘Words’ could not have been given better words. Thnx for sharing this with us… Dear Pritts.
once again.. thanks.. Prateek for your valuable review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow!!!! so very well penned my dear….you are a gem …a diamond with everlasting glint……together we will shine even brighter….at the same time i would surely like to congratulate @prateek as he too deserves the accolade for writing so well …in response to all your blogs…..well done n keep it up….
oh! Mini!!! yesssss.. together we shall shine these..
…thanx for being so generous Mini and ofcourse Pritts u too need to be thanked for giving an opportunity to sharpen our edges … 🙂
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Wowwww… Pritpal…… Itz amazing..
You being a wonderful thinker and writer possess the end number of DIAMONDS with you to cut other diamonds and scanty glass like us….
Dushyant…………………………….
words r the weapon for sure…….u can make or destroy things ……a grt thought, perfectly vibed and expressed….
thanks Anish!
Wow 🙂
Ahem !!! Pritpal !!! You are really good …
Munna.. thanks a lot..