let the tears flow.
let the tears flow unashamedly
down these flushed hot cheeks
for tears are here not to tarnish peace
tears trace their journey of fulfilment
tears join that applaud they all presented
at the altar of wishes granted on behest
times unspent, journeys never undertaken
places never visited once
yet the dreams that traversed far and wide
ships with masts filled with wet ocean air
oscillating on wave after wave of turbulent waters
or the boats sailing without effort on calm shallow rivers
tears trace through all yet keep their salts tangy
for tears are designed with a tiny pain hidden in nature’s womb
rainbows culminating in mother pearl shine through dark nights
lightening strikes with thunderous uproar
laughter of souls pierces black skies
souls that have chartered barbed wires with gladiators’ grace
let the tears out grow all dwarf emotions
that might come their way
for the path they trace leads to untarnished unison
respect their right to flow unashamedly
let the tears flow as they are destined to
down the valley of heartaches…
Very Touchy….. Great writing…Pritpal…
beeeautiful lines
…that is exploring the different facet about each one of us albeit very innovatively where even the journey not undertaken…dreams seen but never realized too become the carrier for fulfillment…
…the rivulet of paradoxical streak that keep flushing hot cheeks always…in as much as in joy as in pain undertake their journey not due to any accomplishment but their accomplishment exist in a wish proper and a dream abound …
…accomplishing anything does not have much significance ‘coz fulfillment can never be guaranteed…this gets accentuated some more ‘coz although we all are limited by our ends we bear the burden of our desires unlimited…
….amazing visualizing as usual Dear Pritts…tears are here not to tarnish peace tears trace their journey of fulfillment tears join that applaud they (the journey of fulfillment) presented …
…tears give their tangy taste forever…coz they are not tied to any single set of feelings but they have risen above every emotion whatsoever and they become harbinger for universality typical of its kind…in there very own right…
…dreams desire get unlimited as the universe itself and this infiniteness brings you close to ‘ …the path they trace leads to untarnished unison with everything …’
…did I reach out to the essence … for you to tell Dear…all d best for your next
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